Changes to Narrative

We had a change to our narrative for several reasons. Our locations are in different places and is difficult for us to get to and record. Our locations were initially in Wimbish and Swan Meadow and Waitrose in Saffron Walden. However we are going to be sticking to Waitrose and Swan Meadow because its hard for several of us to get to Wimbish and there would have been a good chance of us getting told to go. We can still be able to record what we wanted to do in Waitrose car park as it still has the desolate open location we need. We finish with a masked man walking towards me and grabbing me by the hand and pulling me away, instead of gaining consciousness in Wimbish and wondering how we got there. Our new ending creates a better narrative and will make people think whats going to happen next. Also we needed to stay within the time limit, if we did have the Wimbish scene we would have run over the limit and by finishing at Waitrose car park we will still be able to finish within two minutes. Our ending works well with the beginning of our film, because straight away at the beginning we see me running but the audience don't know why or who I could be running from. IT finishes with me getting dragged away and this makes people think that it must be who i was running from and what could happen next.